You know it's true my dear
I'm your deepest desire
What is it you fear
Come walk into the fire
You don't hear me walk
Moving too fast to be seen
Inside our brain I talk
And yet no harm I mean
I just want to give
Immortal life to you
So lonely must I live
I hate it that I do
Now my dear don't fight
You will not feel the pain
So gently I will bite
And drink life from your vein
No dear don't walk away
I'll cast on you a stunning spell
I hate to force you here to stay
Please stop to scream and yell
I touch you with my fingertips
Your skin is soft as silk
So lovely as I kiss your lips
Yo turn as pale as milk
My fangs are now inside you deep
Your blood makes me grow strong
So cool the salty tears you weep
You can't bear it for too long
And now my dear you die
I'll bring you back to life
While in my arms you lie
I cut them with a knife
Drink the blood from me
Slowly you'll awake
So different just to be
This life no one can take
Our beauty finds no measure
We are children of the night
Enjoying doom's full pleasure
We shine the darkest light
What did you think
Comments
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Love it...
So full of imagery & depth in a great storytelling narrative with a wonderful rhyme scheme that enthrals throughout...
One of the best I've read from you...
Impressive as always...
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
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I loved it... Really, the rhyme is perfect and the topic actually brilliant without mentioning the word itself once... I appplaud you countless times ( think I read it about 3 times now)...
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Darkly intense poem that opens the mind. Thank you.
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LOVE IT
This is very good in my opinion, it has the right mix of words, and rhymes. It is amazing, I can't even pick out a favorite line, I enjoyed all of it. I'm not a big Vampire fan, but this is just great. thanks for sharing this.
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