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They are who they are, we say they are
because perseption is truth.
Perception is truth as long as we verbalized deception.
Until it comes back to us and their perception is that we are liars.
Lies return to us through the eyes of the beholder.
Then the perception of truth is twisted to the point of tears and no one knows who they are.
A person is lost in the theory that still waters run deep,

and we are all drowning in our own lakes.

Author notes

The contest is about complaints and I've never done well with making complaints very plain in my writing. So I turned it into a little fun pattern and opened it up to the very thing I'm complaining about.... Peoples opinion about the acts, arts, and personality of me.

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  • TerriMac gold member
    November 22
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    You did it very well - We dont always need to rant and rave to complain

    Good Luck