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Through the Years

Through the years
I've lost many tears
waiting for that illusive love
to fall from the Heavens above

Is it real,
or just my heart to steal?
To stab with a dagger
that makes me stagger...

....I fall into the clouds so unclear
to nothing do I adhere

Through the years
I felt many fears
waiting to be set free
from the illusion that I see

Trapped in my own mind
Oh my, it's one of kind!
so scary in there
my souls impaled...

...I fall into the clouds so unclear
to nothing do I adhere


Through the years
The fire seers
of anger bittersweet
How did we meet?

Oh, I remember,
It was December
on the day we were born
to a world so forlorn...

...I fall into the clouds so unclear
to nothing do I adhere


Through the years
I've lost so many tears
just trying to survive
to remain alive

Tied to railroad tracks
the night goes black
I'm decapitated
inhabilitated...

...I fall into the clouds so unclear
to nothing do I adhere


Through the years
I've received no cheers
It's just been me
and I can not see

Where I am going
to what I'm towing
so I dive off the ledge
broken on the ledge...

...I fall into the clouds so unclear
to nothing do I adhere


....I just fall into the abyss
  ....this World I will not miss
....not even a single kiss
....to the devil I am dismissed...

...I fall into the clouds so unclear
to nothing do I adhere!

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  • Ken-Maverick
    November 24
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    JUDGED!!

    This read like lyrics,
    the rhythm and flow in this was shaweetly executed.
    A wonderful write indeed.

    Thanks for entering
    and all the best to you in the contest.

    Ken