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Your memories

Soft sun rays falling on
your brown hairs shining
like a distant galaxy
call me to touch and
sleep in their shadows
like rays
glow softness of yours
I miss you baby
my first crush of
childhood
now, you've a baby
but your memories
best my eyes ever had
under sun rays still
steal my heart

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Prompt: best I ever had
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  • Palas Kumar Ray
    November 10
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    Memories are to stay forever under the shadow of tall passing days.