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the problem

i walk through the door,
not a problem on my shoulders,
and there you are,
always making me colder,
madder,
it builds up,
and still i remain unmoved,
because when i arrive,
you start to cry,
still weeping,
i take my fist up in the air,
and punch him straight across his fat face,
throwing him to the ground,
he grunts,
bleeding from his nose,
he cry's in pain,
and i just get more and more rage,
till its all over,
and you on the ground,
and I'm standing over you,
dead...

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  • the-hurricane-girl
    November 19

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    <3

    i love it, you have a way with words... i like how the bitterness and hate really shows in 'punch him straight across his fat face' ... well written xx


  • scars of life911
    November 11

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    I liked it. It was a good write! Not the ending i expected but that only increased the satisfaction of it.


  • Xxcant runxX
    November 9
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    wow insailnly good great job


  • Syko Path
    November 9
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    ooooh..

    ::shiver::

    this is good!