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crabs and shellfish play


crabs and shellfish play
as she slowly creeps away
ebb tide


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  • azure85 gold member
    November 21
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    An excellent haiku about the life on shore, as the lure of the sea slowly fades away into the ocean. Thank you so much for your pirate-ku.


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    November 9

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    Nice nature Haiku...Like the vision of sea creatures playing in the spray of the oceans ebbing tide. Serene. Good visuals. ~gypsy~

  • hezakiah
    November 9
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    Ahha! Cool Ku.