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Cream Colored Dreams

 

 

 

 

Cream colored dreams

                              float around my mind

in feather formation

                        through the winds of time

 

Sensual meanings erase all pain

          felt in the heart from strategic gain

 

I hold in my arms the earthly globe of life

   to comfort the womb of a childless wife

 

Swirls of blue passion flow erotic emotion

as I comfort my partner

                                 with loving devotion

 

Electrical static of purple hue

    represents happiness in future with you

 

All encompassed exuding radiant beams

            through the words of time fill my

 

Cream colored dreams

 

 

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Color Cream

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    November 15
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    Wow; very intense piece
    and so rich with warmth,
    devotion and love.

    I really like the photo too.

    Best of luck & thanks for entering

  • SimplySonnets gold member
    November 9

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    You re-paint the picture magnificently, with perfect word choice you create the sound of love, well done and thank you, good luck.


  • The Drifter
    November 9

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    A beautiful write filled with love and warmth. While a couple may not have it all, they have each other embrasing each other. Finding comfort in each other's arms is a wonderful thing in and of its self and can fill any void or at least soften the blow.
    Thank you for sharing.


  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    November 9

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    This is such a well written poem. I really liked it. The picture went really well with the piece. Great job on this poem and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.



    -Steve-