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An Enduring Match(silver&bronze)



Knowingly juxtaposed,
the daystar breathes light
as lunar's crescent wears cloak of
night dreams.

In spheres of circular motion
they dance
and side by side
circumference the planet,
embracing mere mortals
within their fine, celestial orbit.

Lovers of time and space,
king and queen of this earth,
soulmates within a lonely universe,
their enduring juxtaposition
transcends meagre thought.



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Both words - juxtaposition & lunar

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  • Mango Memories
    November 24
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    Bravooo!


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    November 13

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    Beautifully Spoken...

    Your muse is such an inspiration!! I stand in awe of this wonderful poem!! Best wishes in the contest, and let your quill flow on and on, Ms. Poet!!
    Peace,
    Cyn


  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    November 9

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    Yay! Another person managed to combine both words. Beautifully done too. Thank you for taking the time to enter. Excellent work and I wish you the best of luck in our contest




    -Steve-


  • Abby In Chains. silver member
    November 9
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    This is just amazing.


  • penman gold member
    November 9

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    excellent

    Such a terrific write. And so perfect for the prompts. The very best in the contest

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