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AngelBelleRose

Again I write of a new found friend
Not knowing if she will ever read
God’s gift to me he does send
Entombed creativity she has freed
Look at the words that writes
Beautiful beyond all compare
Enlightening my darkest nights
Lucky that she writes with great care
Leaving no detail uncorrected
Enlivening my writes with her critique
Remaining hidden and protected
Only I am enslaved to her mystique
She is the mistress within the night
Enrapturing me with every write

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Yes I am freaking sick still another Acrostin but this time in Sonnet form!

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  • Andre ben-YEHU
    November 23
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    Sublimely composed...


    An excellent acrostic honoring a dedicated human being and Poet. "AngelBelleRose" flows beautifully and shows a profile of the Tributee.

    Much gratitude to the author of "AngelBelleRose".

    In respect and admiration,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


  • Riftkin gold member
    November 17
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    This was amazing and an acrostic for her. Thank you for entering this again for me. Best of luck in the contest.

    Riftkin


  • ubercrazygirl gold member
    November 9

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    breathtaking

    you are amazing! This is beautiful and tells so much about her it's wonderful. She truely is an amazing gifted poetress and is extremely kind hearted. Bravo!


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 9

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    you have quite a talent for acrostics; this is another fine example of your skill and kindness mate lovely from beginning to end!

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    November 9

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    I couldn't sleep so came in to read some poetry and came across yours, this is a most beautiful tribute to Angel, who is as much beautiful herself, and I can see she is greatly honored, as one would be that is written for, these contests are always great as they allow appreciation for fellow poets to shine through, making people's days, pen on dear Brother, Josie


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    November 9

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    OMGosh this is stunning hun I can't believe you have penned this awesome Acrostic for me.. this is so kind. I am so honored for you have made me smile.. I am truly touched by your words J..I have pinned this to my page many hugs always for this gift from you well received.. thank you so much Angel♥

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