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Please Mama! Please!

look what I found Ma!
can I keep him, please!
he's so darn cute
and has no fleas

his nose is cold
so he isn't sick
he hasn't got
a single tick

I'll walk him
when he needs to pee
I'll feed him well
when he whines at me

oh Mama!
he's as cute as a bug
and look at how
he likes a hug

so please Mama, please!
can I keep this dog
I promise
I'll return the hog

(I brought home yesterday!)

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picture is prompt found here: http://allpoetry.com/poem/add?contest=2466159

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  • mgmc gold member
    November 9
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    I think this definitely qualifies as CUTE and funny! Great take on prompt! Best of luck with contest!