Winter is now here
listen as the snow falls
watch it as it blankets
the entire mountainside
taste each snowflake
as it melts on your tongue
listen to the wind
as it moves and calls out
beckoning you
to come out and play
Author notes
20-50 Words
Prompt: Bury the sounds of summer.
A contest entry
- quickiieeeeeeeeeeeeee by perfectsunset.
625 points, ended November 9, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I appreciate your comments and applause on my work. However, please do not use my name in your comments due to the contest rules. Thank you very much!
Comments
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OhOhOH! I want the background
this poem is gorgeous and makes me pause and smile; I adorrrrrrre Winter ... which you know so love love love this!
'grats on the Honourable Mention sweet brother
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Oh how pretty are your thoughts
as the arrival of the snow falls
and child or adult we play those fun games in the season of winter
Best wishes
Julie
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Beautifully scribed,
and I really enjoy
the background!
Best of luck & thanks for entering
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What a wonderful poem. So many memories I find in your poem. Like the background is it your own.? Keep up the great writing.
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Your words have created a lovely mood, and sense of fun.
I enjoyed this.
Well done.
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