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Insignificance

Broken glass
There they lay,
Shards of helplessness

Wilted flower
How they fall,
Silently to the ground

Frightened children
There we hide,
Running from great need

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  • Captain Jenny
    November 10
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    Short and sweet. Pretty good for you frist write.

    ~Rayven


  • Kira65
    November 9
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    it is a good first poem.... it is short but very nice....
    although it seems to have no flow....