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Superwoman

As a young girl
you were my superwoman
I looked into your ocean blue eyes
and saw love and inspiration,
As I grew the years flew by,
like warm summer days
our moments of laughter,
playdates, crying shoulders
dfting seprating us with it,
the world kept turning
as we stayed still seprate
Now a muture young woman
we still stay distant,
at the same time just miles apart
your superwoman status
is no longer visible
your love and inspiration is no more
now disappointment and sadness
is all I know
wishing the world would pause
just for a moment
so we can be reunited with the past
so I can be yours and you can be mine again
I miss your ocean blue eyes
I miss my mom

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  • Tzipora
    November 11
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    As a young girl
    you were my superwoman
    I looked into your ocean blue eyes
    and saw love and inspiration,
    As I grew the years flew by,
    like warm summer days
    our moments of laughter,
    playdates, crying shoulders
    dfted away seprating us with it,

    - this was a sad part for me, made me think of my relationship with my mom. and even though shes right next to me i feel that we have drifted apart. nicely done this was a great write.

    ps.

    dfted away seprating us with it,

    its drifting and separating.