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"As Drunken Men Find Flaws in Science"

I've been lying on the
cold ground,
thinking
of the sounds
that escaped my mouth,
my mouth,
my mouth.
Stars overhead,
and white choruses
ripped
from your mouth,
your mouth,
your mouth.
Just spit it out already;
I'm ready
to hear what you'll say.
I'm ready to be broken today.

I've been lying on the
cold ground,
feeling
so bound
like I lost my mouth,
my mouth,
my mouth.
A sea of voices,
and I can't wake up;
Sleeping
in your mouth,
your mouth,
your mouth.
Just spit me out already;
I'm unsteady-
I was frozen when found,
lying on the cold ground.

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  • riobravo1
    November 9

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    terrifying
    but thoroughly good.

    the only line that I didn't like was
    "I'm ready to be broken today."

    and I have no rational reason why.