What am I going to do ...?
What am I going to do..?
I don't know anymore ...
I had some Solace .
Some Piece of Mind ...
I had Control of everything I am .
Now I have Nothing .
Love , is Love .
But WHAT is love ?
What is the Meaning ?
What is the Point ?
Love , for Love ... By Love and ...gone ...
Miss you ?
I agonize .
Hate you ?
I'm Brutalized ...
"I Love You!"
Your full of lies ...
What is there ?
What is there to keep me from snapping ?
What is there to keep me from unleashing ?
Flames ...So many flames ...
I'm burning inside ...
I'm going to Die .
But it does not bother me ...
No matter how much Rum I drink ..
No matter how many Pills I take ..
I do not sleep me Final Sleep .
I can get no rest from this Havoc ! The Hell , This Empty thing You call "Life"
It disgusts me ... It Sickens me ...
Do you not see it .
The Rage that grows within ?
I've thought long and Hard ...
I've thought hard and Long .
I've broken vows .
What is there to keep me sane ?
You asked for my heart , I gave you my soul .
You asked for my Body , and I gave you it all ...
There is nothing left in me .
Not even Apathy .
I want nothing , I want not .
Death is a grand thing .
But is it what I cannot have now ?
Am I really so Cursed , as to be forced ...
To walk among Those I Hate so Greatly ?
...am I so cursed as to be forced to Remember You !?
...Remember ...What was ...
Author notes
There is ...no point ...
hehehehe
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Thisis completely mindblowing.
I have honestly never read anything like it before.
The increadable onslaught of emotion from this was breathtaking.
This is a truely fantastic write and i look forward to reading more of your work.x -
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Thank you for the comment lass ... But this was really just a quick write to releave stress ...
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they tears rage within that crimson where memories haunt thy heart and sicken thy soul*
Keepnning on one stroke at a time!
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strokes....
Feels like bloody awful blows to the very Fabric of Existence ...
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wow this is deffenetly my favorate on this site great job
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I doubt that ...
I've written Far better in the past --.--
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Only you...
Can prevent forest fires friend.
To lose the basic mammalian animal instinct to just want to BREATHE is.... devastating.
"It disgusts me ... It Sickens me ...
Do you not see it .
The Rage that grows within ?
I've thought long and Hard ...
I've thought hard and Long .
I've broken vows ."
I really enjoyed the way that was written. I am also, honestly glad you are writing, and not purchasing a semi-automatic.
This one didn't "hit" me like others you have written that I have read, and "woot" I found a typo! ;-P
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Never even ...
Considered a Firearm ...Not my style . And yea ...I haven't really written anything for a while ...I need to get back into it full time .
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