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Rollin' on the River

Sweet tranquility
Sweet serenity
Rollin' down the river.

Take me,
Take me down the stream
Let me roll on the river.

The waves and ripples
The fish and turtles
Rollin' down the river.

Rainbow colors
And beautiful bird feathers
Gently rollin' down the river.

Let me follow,
Let me take it all in
Let me roll on down the river.

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11-8-09
10:32am

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