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Hang In There

Nervous and Anxious
He stands on the ledge
He's ready to take his very last breath
One step, then two
He's keeping a pace..
While the pinkest color..
Disappears from his now pale face.

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  • The Devil18
    November 9
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    wow this is so good nice work


  • Kira65
    November 9

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    it is a good poem..... although to me it seems like it ended a little to early... a few more lines and it would be a marvelous poem...but overall it is still a good write