Passion flows from your lips
creating a longing for your touch
just a taste of your secrets
Your words intoxicate
like a drug
always leaving the reader wanting more
All fall in line when you speak
for you are strong
and oh so sexy
You have a spirit that will not die
pushing on when things get rough
like the phoenix you rise
From the fire that tries to drag you down
burn your wings so you cannot fly
wanting to destroy
A mistress in the night
you command with your pen
and tame with your whip
Sexy, smart, and always fun
You are my PassionsPromise
Author notes
PassionsPromise.... This woman is sweet, strong, and what a lot of women wish they could be. A good friend and a wonderful poetess. The pic is from here http://images.teamsugar.com/files/upl1/1/12981/04_2009/d4bbfdc24519347f_boob.jpg
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A contest entry
- Pick A Poetess and Write by Riftkin.
700 points, ended November 16, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Poetess PassionsPromise poems....from my contest by Riftkin.
700 points, ended November 19, 4 entries
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nice entry.. Your Poety is damn good...
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Nicely done, please place in the contest
the message sent you to
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I'm not sure where you're getting all this inspiration lately, but I'd really appreciate it if you'd consider lending me your Muse for a time. This is just beautiful, Robin. This had a wonderful flow, and "feel" to it. Another beautiful poem. Good luck in the contest!
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This is beautiful true emotions expressed here.
keep writing dear 
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I like the poem. Good job, good luck, and keep writing!!
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amazing
I loved reading this.. I hope some day someone will think of me like this.. You have an incredable gift for emotion and sensuality.. I truly enjoy your work,
Amy
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Precious~
Oh My this is a Gem Robin for a Gem~
and Love the Dedication for I imagine this will bring a smile
to her face~ Bless Your Heart
You Both are Precious!!
This is a Beauty~
Your words speak volumes~ Sweet One
Keep that quill dancing
Thank You for sharing Your Voice & Heart
Best wishes in the contest~
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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What a wonderfully sweet dedication!
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This is beautiful and well written. I didn't realize you were speaking of someone with that AP name...I was thinking "Passion's Promise" Great work....enjoyed the read, as always.
Sam
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This is simply lovely
Thank you so much hon
this piece brought a huge smile to my
face
Good luck in the contest hon
Passionspromise
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