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glass on the wall-- split up
          fo
                  ur
  ti
        mes
through which I can see my--
  self split up into parts ti
                                          mes
                  fo
                                ur
head blocked by purple paper and tape--
meant to inspire instead of

                                  cut me off at my nape
angles of the third square misalign my legs
but this means something
I
know it
how I misalign myself with the world on
pur
    pose
I hate keep
ing th
ings the way they should be its so bor
ing to keep th
ings as they are I was think
ing that maybe I should propose a new writ
ing style where all lines begin with
ing

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  • English.Muffin silver member
    November 17
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    This made me smile, and im quite in love with this poem. Your simple meaning to this is excellent and i love your erratic structure. I even read this twice straight away.
    Thanks for your entry