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Master and Slave

I look at you and my own imperfection
your smile sickening my infection
why so wicked that you have to kill me
I'm useless now with no worth to be
my blood boiling as you leave me in the ditch
I was yours you dumb bitch



If I awaken to smack some sense into your skull
will the feeling of pain and burden dull
I hate you yet I love you
your punishments addicting to their due
I deserve it master
beat me down and kill me faster



Bleeding and shrieking in the chains
braces my self with your fist and enjoying the pains
why can't I bring myself to face it
what did you do to me as I throw a fit
end it you cruel bastard now
or I'll do it for you some how

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This doesn't have a real meaning and has nothing to do with me at all or my feelings.

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  • Dark-Ecanus27
    November 9

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    this is wickedly amazing definantly glad this doesnt apply to a real life situation for you, for you are a slave to know one. and if you are i shall liberate you even if it costs me everything!


  • xxuglyducklingxx
    November 9

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    Fucking Brilliant.

    My God...this is incredible. Intricate, Divine, Sexy in a weird sort of demeaning way. You are so brilliant and talented. :=3!!! I loved this. Everything about this even proves that you are the better poet. Brava on another outstanding write. Keep writing!


    • Seraph Avalon
      November 9
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      lol

      Your kidding a hundred times over... Your amazing to my friend! -hugs crying tears on your shirt- I need to do a lot better though.