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Heaven nor Hell

Leave me here all alone to die
please don't come to my funeral
and don't you cry
leave a black rose on my grave

as a reminder of the on you could have saved

you'll be fine above ground

soon I am sure ill see you around

I'll be fine where i am

a dark cold place below land

 

nobody can smile

nobody asks why

we just let each day 

go by

no more laughter

no more joy

this was something 

you could've avoid

 

you pulled the trigger to my heart

now my body's down here to rot

but my spirit is in good shape

but those memories, 

i can't erase

i guess i am doing just well

in a place that's not heaven nor hell

 

 this is just a poem i found from my sophomore year so i decided to post it

 

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