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Halls of Night

It is well before my time to sleep;
the darker corners emerge
from the faded page
and yet I breathe falling dust.

As if light had penetrated my thoughts
whispering to me,
sweetly supple caresses
as time moves through
darker shades and halls of night.

Let me know How this makes you feel, what do you think?

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  • suseann
    November 30
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    Twilight pre slumber seeps a sense of calming "open to the stars" thoughts in this piece. Half expectancy of a lovely relaxing dreamscape alchemy overtakes the reader's mind.


  • Amera gold member
    November 8

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    This poem is a delight to read as it makes me feel an introspective part of you. It’s almost like you have a slight inferiority complex but you try to ignore it.

    love,
    Amera