My heart beats for you,
Yearning for your love.
Secretly hoping you'll see,
Our bond is very sacred.
Usually I'm not so forward,
Lingering slightly behind.
Maybe, just maybe, one day,
A special passion will erupt.
Taste the sweetness of,
♥Everlasting love♥
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Notice what the first letters going down read 
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Amazing
Your soulmate is seriously lucky to have you, love the poem. I think it needs a bit more emotion though, just to make the reader actually feel the love (gee, I sound evil Sowwie) but so far so good, loving the lines "our bond so sacred" and "taste the sweetness of everlasting love." thanks for sharing and keep writing and entertaining x
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you dont sound evil silly...you just gave an opinion which is welcomed of course!!!
Thanks for reading and commenting hun!
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You are always welcomes sis
I should be thanking u for adding the poem. My english teacher says I'm hard to please because of the critique I give to my classmates.
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