I feel strength in each tender touch-
strength that cradles my heart.
Lost within careless whispers;
a subtle breath that plays its part.
The warmth that grazes soft, my neck
lingers as if a kiss beyond compare.
Each finger's trace upon my skin...
oh how I wish were really there.
To taste the sweetness of your lips
and dance in heated passionate kiss;
my thoughts are tinted rose colored
sated in heavenly bliss.
Wrapped in a moment, to never let go
each sensation quite supreme...
Until we meet beneath the stars
I'll love you from my dreams.
Author notes
Perhaps not what you seek, but what is in my mind at the moment.
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In a list
A contest entry
- Fill me with Romance.... by Riftkin.
700 points, ended November 9, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Nicely done and romance just pours softly within your words.
Best of luck to you with it.
Riftkin

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THis is totally filled with romance, it is both sensual and tender, you have woven magic within your words, blessings with love John


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Lovely romantic dream you have woven here with just a hint of passion, if only he were there. Wishing you the best of luck in the contest.


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Wow....
..... i just can not copy and paste the entire poem in this box and say that it was my favorite, so I will just say this is a remarkable write and I enjoyed start to finish.

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so romantic and sensuous in song.. a love so deep in heart and pining for him to come in the flesh a long kiss remember in dreams... beautiful hun as always you have hugs Angel♥


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