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Dreaming

I feel strength in each tender touch-
strength that cradles my heart.
Lost within careless whispers;
a subtle breath that plays its part.


The warmth that grazes soft, my neck
lingers as if a kiss beyond compare.
Each finger's trace upon my skin...
oh how I wish were really there.


To taste the sweetness of your lips
and dance in heated passionate kiss;
my thoughts are tinted rose colored
sated in heavenly bliss.


Wrapped in a moment, to never let go
each sensation quite supreme...
Until we meet beneath the stars
I'll love you from my dreams.

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Perhaps not what you seek, but what is in my mind at the moment.

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  • Riftkin gold member
    November 9
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    Nicely done and romance just pours softly within your words.

    Best of luck to you with it.

    Riftkin

  • SoulWhispher
    November 9
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    THis is totally filled with romance, it is both sensual and tender, you have woven magic within your words, blessings with love John


  • toomysterious
    November 8
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    Lovely romantic dream you have woven here with just a hint of passion, if only he were there. Wishing you the best of luck in the contest.

  • JToddUnderhill
    November 8
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    Wow....

    ..... i just can not copy and paste the entire poem in this box and say that it was my favorite, so I will just say this is a remarkable write and I enjoyed start to finish.


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    November 8
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    so romantic and sensuous in song.. a love so deep in heart and pining for him to come in the flesh a long kiss remember in dreams... beautiful hun as always you have hugs Angel♥

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