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Insane

Stuck in a jacket
In a white room
Such a small place
It seems this is my doom

In comes a woman, dressed in white
She says to me "You came here last night"
I had no idea what she was on about
For some reason, I knock myself out

My dream is horrible, terrifying to see
A bunch of heads on sticks,
And in the middle, there's me

I can't escape this horrible place
Everyone has a messed up face
I feel that I'm in so much pain
I think that I have gone insane

Don't know where to go,
And I don't know where I came from
I'm suddenly back home
It was all a dream, all night long

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  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    November 10
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    Welcome to AllPoetry!!!

    That was some dream you had...I have some pretty weird ones, too...
    Welcome to AllPoetry! I hope you have lots of fun on this site!

    Blessed Be,
    Jeremy
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  • phylumasylum
    November 10
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    ooo, i like this one!^^ Especially the dream! That would have to be my favorite part of the poem!