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Take a Chance

Take a chance
to start your life
over and begin
something you will
never forget

I found out the hard way
that life takes some hard
tumbles and you bend
sometimes until you
break

Falling down, ripped apart
not knowing when my world
will ever turn out right.

I will take a chance, break
the cycle and live my life
so that I am once more happy
again

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7. Starting Over

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  • Topaze gold member
    November 22
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    Thank you for this fine entry, my best wishes.


  • The Drifter
    November 9

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    A well written comentment to renewing one's life. The flow is very good that carries the reader along like a blosoming flower, fresh, new, with a sweet pure scent. Thank you for sharing.