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I Miss You

I know you had your reasons to go
One of the reasons were the cuts you showed
But the other reasons were much worse
I thought about them as I saw your hearse

I know how he was tortured by his dad,
And how his behaviour made you mad
And how you wish he’d never gone,
But he has, gone for long

I wish we hadn’t disagreed
On that horrible last day by the trees
I wish I could apologise
For all I did, for all the lies

It’s too late to do anything now,
Maybe I’ll see you, I don’t know how
I have those cuts on my arm too
We could be twins, me and you

I miss you so much every day
And I wish something would take it all away
And the one I miss, the one who I knew
Is the beautiful, wonderful, you

Dedicated to my best friend Lauren, who committed suicide in 2008

R.I.P Lauren, missing you always
xxxx



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  • p12string
    November 10
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    p12string

    I can relate to this.My best friend killed himself yesterday because he was abused at his home life....Thanks for the poem.

    • Mr Scarman
      November 10
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      Wow, I'm so sorry for your loss, it's hard isn't it :/

      Hope you're okay
      xx

  • The Devil18
    November 9
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    wow this is deep sad an really good i love it srry for your lose


  • Englandgirl2008
    November 9

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    I am so sorry for your lose.
    This was a great yet sad write.Almost was in tears.
    Brought back memories of my past.
    If you need someone to talk to I am always
    here.
    Take care


  • ekmlovesmusic
    November 9
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    im sorry

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