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On the ground

On the ground
No breath left to take
No one comes around
to help me out of this lake

I'm drowning
into the deep dark sea.
Will somebody help me, save me please?

I'm forced to fake a smile
even after I turn on myself.
Will I file my life away?

Will I be existent in a frame
or will I be the one to constantly blame?

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  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    November 10

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!!!

    I love your imagery and descriptions...I hope things pick up for you. I know how you feel, I feel this way sometimes...
    Welcome to AllPoetry! I hope you enjoy yourself on this site!

    Blessed Be,
    Jeremy
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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 8

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    Hmmm, the ending to this makes each person think deeper. Are we always to blame? In essence, sort of. But not in totality. Kind of interesting. Good write.

    Welcome to AP. if you have any questions, feel free to IM me.
    Keep expressing through writing.
    Storm
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