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Turn Back

Turn back and watch the highway
pass you by, some things are
just meant to break your heart

Going through the motions
just isn't right when love
stops being believed in

And I don't know why
but I fell out of love
when we fell apart

So turn back on a broken highway
and watch the pieces fall out
of place over and over again.

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  • Rhi
    November 29
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    Good write.


  • The Drifter
    November 9

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    A very sad poem of hopelessness. If the pieces can't be glued back together, then turn your back on it and move on down the highway. No need a hurting yourself time and again with reliving pain. Put your face into the Sun and proceed down the highway. Thank you for sharing.