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Softly we move under a moon of silk
embraced in the clouds so high,
we float in the seas of the loving winds
velvet caresses and sheen whispered sighs.

We waltz we move in gentle sway
in the breeze we are adrift,
melodies play in our souls such warmth
captivated thoughts now shift.

Like butterflies dancing over the meadows green
and a songbird that sings in the rain,
a tune so sweet tempting soft serenity
this chorus two lover's can only attain.

The forests of old whispers tell there tales
the lands from afar murmur of yore,
of old love reborn a new rekindled
spectrum's falling to once again soar.

Hand in hand we dance in the shimmering rain...










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  • awannabepoet
    November 22
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    There you go here is another fine example of your poetic growth, quite the fun read as Amera said the quatrains are a delight.

    Thanks for sharing Cuz, you always have a way with those words.


  • redmoonnrizing silver member
    November 10
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    A truly gorgeous piece...you indeed have a way with words and I absolutely love this!!!!

    "The forests of old whispers tell there tales
    the lands from afar murmur of yore,
    of old love reborn a new rekindled
    spectrum's falling to once again soar".




  • bloodlust83
    November 10
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    What a beautiful love poem you have written! It's very mystical and romantic at the same time. I love the idea of dancing in the shimmering rain.


  • The Drifter
    November 9

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    Beautifully written of an old love reborn with tenderness and a very deep love. Your words paint a beautiful pecture in the readers mind of two intertwined. You conveyed the feeling so very well. Thank you for sharing.


  • Amera gold member
    November 9

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    This poem is beautiful and a joy to recite aloud. This quatrain simply dances with emotional imagery. Bravo!

    love,
    Amera


  • Krios
    November 8

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    AMAZING WRITE

    "Like butterflies dancing over the meadows green
    and a songbird that sings in the rain,
    a tune so sweet tempting soft serenity
    this chorus two lover's can only attain."

    LOVE this part

  • JToddUnderhill
    November 8

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    Good....

    ..... on soft elegant and beautiful. I enjoyed the poem my favorite line is "this chorus two lover's can only attain" Tru words of wisdom there!


  • Jayde1
    November 8

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    awww

    this is a lovely poem my beautiful wife..
    as always i loves writing with you...
    i look forward to our next collab we do....

    you is awesome..

    i loves you loads and loads

    your hubby

    Jayde


    xoxox

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