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I Love Everything About You

I love the fact that you're loyal to me,
That's exactly how a boy should be.
I love the fact that you're the only one on my mind,
It helps that as a couple we should bind.
I love the way your long hair looks,
It reminds me of prince charming from fairy tale books.
I love the way you smile,
It's enough to make the other girls quarrel.
I love the fact that if I'm ever lost,
Your sweetness will come at no cost.


I love everything about you,
Like the sweet things you do.
On the days where I'm down and blue,
I take one look at you and know what to do.
When I have a bad day,
You will tell me that it'll be OK.
At the first sign of worry,
You'll be there to let me know that you're sorry.
When you tell me that you love me,
I realize that love is what it truly has to be.
I love the feeling of knowing,
You would never leave or cheat,
For if you did all you would feel would be my heat.


I love the way you say,
"I love you sweetie, have a great day."
I love the way I met you,
It was like a dream,
And the timing was right.
You're all I think about in the night,
And instead of turning dark, it turns bright.


You mean more to me than life itself.
I would do anything for you,
Just say the word and for you, I would do.
I would give you all you want.
And as for you, I would never hurt you,
For it would be nothing you would do unto me.


I love how you take my breath away,
With every word you say.
My true love has come, come what may.
I love how we can talk for hours,
And how I'm forever yours.
I can continue to explain how much I love you so,
Story made short: I love everything about you.

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  • LesbianOfLove
    November 8

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    You love is very clear in this poem, lol
    Love the use of rhyme in this. Great flow as well.
    Make sure you keep writing! This is some really good work!