I only penetrated her outer folds at first, this long
anticipated plunge into a cathartic realm found
me kneeling by the throat tightening clench of
her moistened form, begging a deeper intrusion.
Our eyes drank from tepid waters spilling echoes over
fevered moons exposing a fragmented sanity pleading
for heated lips to swallow searching tongues in
a dance to quell the mortal yearnings of a soul.
By the candle's wane we became as shadows perched;
tied by the fingers of lust starved gods reenacting scenes
of apocalyptic greed slamming fire thrown swords into
the begging womb of all creation.
Her cries became as the phoenix upon a dark rimmed sky
that clenched the air and stole but staggered breath, I
drove deep to feel her voice in longing sighs that
brought my hand to bear upon her breast.
She teased me to her mouth with quenching whispers
that shattered all of lifeless remnants to an ashen ruin
she clenched my whole as measured strokes collapsed
and drew my heart, but with the utterance of a word.
Author notes
yup.
for Edie
http://allpoetry.com/Edie
A contest entry
- Pick A Poetess and Write by Riftkin.
700 points, ended November 16, 20 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Precious~
Powerful Imagery and Message woven within seams~
I can see she smiled~ Bravo!!
Metaphors Stunning~
First Line~ started the Conscious on an Adventure
No need for me to quote words of Emphasis~
It was all Good~ 
Congratulations on Your Trophy
Woot~
Yay!! 
Keep that quill dancing
Thank You for sharing Your Voice
Best wishes in all You do~
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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This was one well written poem that turned the heat up a bit. Best of luck to you with this.
Riftkin
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Oh my goodness
This is one steamy poem but done very well . Good luck in the contest
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Thank You
I was trying to be coy...
lol
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“I only penetrated her outer folds at first, this long
anticipated plunge into a cathartic realm found
me kneeling by the throat tightening clench of
her moistened form, begging a deeper intrusion.
Our eyes drank from tepid waters spilling echo's over
fevered moons exposing a fragmented sanity pleading
for heated lips to swallow searching tongues in
a dance to quell the mortal yearnings of a soul.”
These lines sigh beautifully...For me? Thank you Roberto...
and I think that somehow, you may have managed to slide past those outer folds...and are beginning discover inner sanctums, or at least the possibility...baby.
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*kisses cheek
glad you enjoyed it baby...
the great thing about inner sanctums are
they tend to be quite beautiful, and after
glimpsing the outer fold it seems hard to
believe that a greater beauty.....
exists.
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