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The Reoccurring Nightmare

Terror as I flee

blindly running

the night consuming me

unearthly howls in the distance

the fur on my neck stands up

they're growing closer

makes me even blinder

bolting through the unforgiving dark

ghostly trees looming over me

I run knowing I can not escape

 

 

Helpless

 

 

An undescribable shriek

makes me turn my head

in that instant a crack of light

blinding more

as it barely shocks through my pelt

past me and into a tree

the living being cries out in pain

it's limbs burn and spark

in an effortless motion

it falls heavily infront of me

blocking my path

I can go no further

 

 

Trapped

 

 

It was futile to begin with

I watch in disbelief

the gods must be laughing at me

I turn to face my enemies

but I jump out of my skin

their hideous features

drooling from their fangs

tinged with blood

their own blood

these diseased mindless wolves

tower over me as they spit hate

their dull clouded eyes

stare into my soul

the twosome advance at me

 

 

Finished

 

 

The end was enivitable

I only had stalled it to this moment

the tree screams in agony for me

as I can not utter a sound

too afraid my throat clenched

I choke from the flames smoke

the fire dancing around use

keeping us in a cage

without a chance at life

the monsters longe at me

tairing away at me

but I can't feel the pain

I watch my destruction in horror

through their eyes

they spew blood at one another

as if to communicate

I do not know what they plan to do

 

 

Snow

 

 

Tossing me into one another's jaws

with no grief

or mercy they play with my limp form

the tree makes it's last cry

as it turns to ashes

burnt up in the flames

the two engulfed by the fire's hate

my body untouched

snow falls and melts harshly against the flames

the heat dies with me

I become buried in snow

at peace

sound

and in mind

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Well this was a nightmare I had so long ago.. before I even liked wolves. Unfortunately they have reoccurred just last night. I need help..

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  • Dark-Ecanus27
    November 8
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    -yowls in grief-


    • Seraph Avalon
      November 8
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      -Sits with my knees to my chest trembling my eyes full of fear and worry- Why the hell do they keep coming back! I thought these visions left long ago! -Cries out- This was the dream I ever remembered having strange connected meanings... After that I always envisioned strange hunting dreams... Many inspired what I do with my life... Some were about Darien's demon leeching onto my friend's soul. I had to kill him... They are so intense I they could squeeze the life out of me!

      • Dark-Ecanus27
        November 8
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        -pulls you into my lap and gently strokes your hair- its ok, its only a dream. you have been thinking about darien and wanting to help him so much lately, its no wonder this came back to the surface.

        • Seraph Avalon
          November 8
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          I don't see how this dream makes sense at all to my life.... Normally they predict something... but this time it's just pure fear..


  • xxuglyducklingxx
    November 8
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    :O!!!

    This is wickedly epic!!! The imagery is mastered perfectly. Brava on yet again another incredible write. I love your work..Wow this is so inspiring. I could just read it over and over and over and over...

    • Seraph Avalon
      November 8
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      -Shivers-

      Sadly though it wasn't something I willingly made up... It was a nightmare.. i had it five years ago. And it has returned.. -shakes-

      • xxuglyducklingxx
        November 8

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        AWWWWWWWW!!!

        None of that. I'm so sorry. I have nightmares...that are pretty bad and I don't wish that on you. You are so sweet. Just send them my way. You're my friend, and I'm more than willing to have them and take them for you! !


        • Seraph Avalon
          November 8
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          Trust me... You don't want what's in my skull.... -Trembles uncontrollably-

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