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Test Of Time


So many lines have been written
and there are so many more to come
as the pen streaks across the page
and I’m writing another one

Every mood brought to words
with a little feel of life
sometimes it works out right
other times it’s well okay

Any prompt will do
if I’m in the right mood
I can write about anything
but that’s not always so

Sometimes the words flow too quickly
and it’s hard for me to keep up
the pen is like a race track
perhaps this time I shall win

I enjoy getting the feedback
it tells me I’m not insane
as teardrops spill upon endless pages
and some of it mixed with wine

I tell the whole truth
and nothing less or more
words captured in a moment
can stand the test of time


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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    November 20
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    You're very welcome...

    I forgot the clappies...

  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    November 20
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    Poignantly Honest...

    Reminds of of the line by Shakespeare: "This above all: To Thine Own Self Be True". Thank you for your introspective, heart-felt entry, I wish you all the best!! Take care...
    Peace Always,
    Cyn


    • Topaze gold member
      November 20
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      Thank you very much dear lady. My best wishes.


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    November 8

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    simply gorgeous!!
    well penned Sir,
    beautiful!!

    love and blessings

    Rend


  • Riftkin gold member
    November 8
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    This is wonderful and so is the poet. Best of luck to you with this, my friend.

    Riftkin

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