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hearts

♥

fleeting, fleeting
evanescent feeling

(butterflies are so
much easier to catch)

but i'm already
f
a
l
l
-i
--n
---g

further down
inside this
heaven/hell/heaven
they call
love.

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  • Virgoan
    November 18
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    I like the moment implied in this brief piece and the brokenness is really effective.

    You've done a good job poet.


    Thanks and regards,

    Hensley