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I Love You

I can never say,
I love u,
too many times,
for it's true.

I can never stop staring,
into your gorgeous eyes,
with out you,
I can't go on.

At night I think,
how good we look together,
If I really deserve you?
Yes I really do.

You say I mean the world to you,
for me it's the same,
I can't ever get enough of your love,
you mean everything.

So kiss my lips,
don't forget,
that we shall last,
till the end.

I Love You!

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I wrote this for my boyfriend. I love you hon..

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  • UncleDunk gold member
    November 8

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    I love the fact you realize
    That you, like him, deserve the best
    For self-esteem on both your parts
    Oft gives true love it's greatest zest


  • fiona8 silver member
    November 8
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    I hope he appreciates what you have written, it is a loving piece.
    You shared a thoughtful journal here today, too.