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I've got an appetite for destruction

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a splash of hope
combined with a drop of confidence
I expected that a touch of God would rain out,

but it didn't. 


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A splash of hope,
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  • Im full of RAINBOWS
    November 11
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    i liked it

    your realy good


  • Naridill
    November 8

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    You brevity is one of the finest I have witnessed at AP.


  • islekine gold member
    November 8

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    Very interesting take...

    Says a lot! Thanks so much for entering...best wishes in the contest and always!
    Write on and on...

    and


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    November 8
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    very thought provoking.


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    November 8

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    Interesting...I really like were you took the prompt. Gives you pause to think after reading. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Best of luck in the contest. ~gypsy~


  • Genevieve79
    November 8

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    Nice take on the prompt, I had a hard time with this one *muse is dead* lol I like the : I hoped that a touch of God would rain out,

    but it didn't.

    strong lines for a short piece Good Luck!

  • n.e.o.n gold member
    November 8

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    Ooo this is so creative. I wish I had your mind. My poem for this totally sucks lol. I loved the imagery. You're amazing. <3

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