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Love

My knees get weak,
Everytime you speak.
I can talk to my friends all day,
But when I'm with you, I just can't find the words to say.
Everytime I hear your voice,
My heart beats faster and faster.
Anytime my heart longs for you,
I listen to slow love songs.
I oftentimes think of you out of the blue,
Anytime I'm smiling, it's because I'm thinking of you.
I would do anything for you,
I would even kiss you after a fight.
I can't stay mad at you for more than a second,
I actually have to fight myself to stay mad with all my might.


I find myself reading your messages over and over,
And my mind lingers on every word.
I have butterflies in the pit of my stomach,
And fireworks go off in my head.
I can open up to you more than I can others,
And I can sing to you but to no one else.


There are many ways to tell,
That you're falling in love.
Well, my friend, I've already fell.
I feel all of these feelings,
And many more.
Your love shakes me to the core,
And I always come back for more.
Anytime I feel above the rest,
I realize that you're the one,
And that what I'm experiencing is...
LOVE.

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  • JstaTch
    November 8

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    Your poem is very special. Feelings come from within and what you have expressed obviously came from a special place. I hope you are happy and your poem is a reflection from deep within. Filled with emotion and that makes it a good write.~Your love shakes me to the core,
    And I always come back for more.~