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The Blind Side of the Mirror

And a jealous moon
sees it's own reflection
feeling it has
more perfection
A foolish moon
Jealous of himself
Is a simple reflection
of myself
Not seeing myself
In those twin to me
I'm already the people
who I want to be

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  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    November 10

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    Oh nice train of thought. Not seeing myself in those twin to me...I'm already the people who I want to be"....awesome! Narcissis is not the only mirror looker.

  • Virgoan
    November 9

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    a really ambitious poem that has a room for development. A bit of tweaking, editing will showcase more. I am a fan of short poems and I will be happy to be back and read this poem.

    Thanks for sharing.