All he thought was rachel
All he felt was her
All he saw was rachel
All that he preferred
All he wanted was rachel
All he got was her
All he knew was rachel
And that was all they were
All he dreamed was rachel
She was his only song
All he wrote was rachel
A million times she's drawn
He cried so hard for rachel
Evening until dawn
All he had was rachel
But rachel, she was gone
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- her name. by ZachP.
650 points, ended November 9, 17 entries
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This is so sad, but truly and deeply beautiful. I think everyone knows what this is like. My favourite line was: "She was his only song".
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