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Migration

Why do I come up here?
It's so cold all the time.
I don't have any real friends here.

And the kids are too busy
With their jobs and families
To spend time with me.

I feel like a burden.

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as the voice of my grandma, she said something like this to me once, i didn't know what to say.

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  • Little Gentle
    November 10
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    concise, powerful, and exactly the way i feel right now.