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Your done

I thought you were unlike the rest,
I guess you failed the test.
She was all over you.
I never knew.
She had a boyfriend,
She didn't pretend.
She flirted with you.
And all I could do
was sit and watch.
I tried to flirt too.
She was better.
You chose.
You got her.

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  • prankstar
    November 11
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    aaww. this is so sad. I love this one. Thank you so much for entering.

    ---prankstar


  • Wandering Alone
    November 8
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    haha im not rlly into boys so im a lil not into this convo right now. lmfao


  • Wandering Alone
    November 8
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    haha no im still an ass. im just a lovable ass haha


    • lifelines
      November 8
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      haha yes a bunny who wines wen he gets poked by metal poles lmfao

  • Wandering Alone
    November 8

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    haha hey u had a chance to meet her. she went to jasons party but no u decided to go to ur stupid homecoming. lmao. meanie!!! but yea u 2 should rlly meet. she's a twilight junkie =P

    • lifelines
      November 8
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      lmao well shud i have not gone tyo homecoming then??well no i shudntve it wasnt much fun. o goodness twilight junkie?i got over that a month ago lmao

  • erinXrose
    November 8

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    so sad this has happened to me before too, and it shows how great a guy may seem, but once you see through the outside he's just another heartbreaker


    • lifelines
      November 8
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      yessss it is tru. actually the guy its about commented haha

      • erinXrose
        November 8
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        haha that is soooo weird I'd like die if that happened, and you actually told him it was about him didn't you?

        • lifelines
          November 8
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          yes i did its funny we r actually bestfriends still. ik im surpprised too. i was mad wen it happened sure i yelled at him.hes scared of me cuz i can beat him up too haha. but then i relized i couldnt stay mad at him cuz hes jus my best friend ever and i cant live without him

          • erinXrose
            November 8
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            aww that's so sweet. I'm glad that worked out for you two cuz that's happened to me before and well me and the dude kinda hate eachother now but there were other strikes against us besides that


            • lifelines
              November 8
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              ahhh ic ic. yeaa it sucked but im glad it worked out to sometimes it doesnt tho. but i guess we got lucky.

              • erinXrose
                November 8
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                Hahaha sry dirty mind at work over here. but ya that is great that it worked out and it's bugging me that i can't tell what he looks like cuz idk if this dude is even hot

                • lifelines
                  November 8
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                  ahahaha wat the guy that im talkin bout in the poem??well everyone i talk to says hes hott if that helps buttt he has a g/f hes very nice th

                  • erinXrose
                    November 8
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                    ya that dude. well then i hope they're right but ya i got that from his thingy, though at 14 o don't see how anyone can actually be falling hard, but mayb thats just me

                    • lifelines
                      November 8
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                      ahahahaha hey idk he does seem to rly love her. havent met her tho so idk. even tho im the bestfriend i havent met the girlfriend zak if ur readin this i need 2 meet her.lol. idk i dont understand it but ive never been in a relationship

                      • erinXrose
                        November 8
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                        idk either cuz well idk them, but i'v been in relationships since 5th grade, i'm a bit of a horndog so mayb that's why the whole falling for someone isn't totally something i understand

                        • lifelines
                          November 8
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                          haha ic ic lmao. well me i havent found the right guy yet. all the ones ive liked turned out to b asses. haha cept u of course zak XD

                          • erinXrose
                            November 8
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                            Yeah I don’t exactly know how to pick them either, but I pick fun asses


                            • lifelines
                              November 8
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                              hahaha sounds like XD
                              buttt ive never had anyone so yeaaa idk if they were fun haha

                              • erinXrose
                                November 8
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                                haha o right sry ignore my boy craziness im working on it


                                • lifelines
                                  November 8
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                                  haha dont worry bout it. im used to it. ur like my best friend. she alwayss says stuff like tht

                                  • erinXrose
                                    November 8
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                                    lol ok good cuz i'm not so sure i really wanna work on it i'm happy with being boy crazy why change something i love right?


                                    • lifelines
                                      November 8
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                                      sounds good

                                      • erinXrose
                                        November 8
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                                        ya but i have the next best thing a bii bff so that's good enough for me. He asks gay when we go shopping anyway


  • Wandering Alone
    November 8
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    awww this is sad =( i sowii


    • lifelines
      November 8
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      u shud b!its about u!!lol jk u shudnt b sryy haha but it is about u

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