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In Your Eyes

In your eyes, I see forever,
You are the best above the rest.
In your eyes, I see a true love,
A love that no one is above.
In your eyes, I see eternity,
I can see me being there for you, and you being there for me.
In your eyes, I see our future family,
And you growing old with me.
In your eyes, I see the day I cried,
The day you asked me to be your bride.
In your eyes, I see the second day I cried,
The day I became your bride.
In your eyes, I see a truth,
I see honesty when you proclaim your love.
In your eyes, I see trust,
Your trust in me is just.
In your eyes, I see a tear,
Because you are happy that you need not fear.
In your eyes, you see me cry,
Because I saw all of this happen in your eyes.

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