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Untitled - Angel, Part I

Eyes like amber
Encased in emerald and sapphire
Glistening in the fading sun
Like crystalline orbs
Seeming so fragile yet having seen so much
Regretfully toughened by sadness and pain
To show the world a colder exterior
Than they would find true
If they could but look beyond the colors
They could find you-
My angel with a conscience.

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  • The Drifter
    November 9
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    Oh yes, we all have our fronts that we put up to the world in general, but is that really us or something deeper and better or is it darker, more sinister, not for anyone to see?
    You chose the softer side. One must conclude that you know what is inside in this case and know that there is worth deep inside.
    Thank you for sharing.