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Love Me

Love me
now...

Love me
tomorrow..

Love me
always...

Love me
when others turn away...

Love me
despite my flaws...

Love me
when I fall to silence...

Love me
as you love yourself...

Love me
always...

Love me
today...

Love me
this second...

I love you...

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  • amnouup
    November 9
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    So sweet

    Its so sweet that steals heart in a second, nice work friend :-)
    regards,
    Mou


  • Amera gold member
    November 9
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    This is a simple yet delightful study in epanaphora.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • evershine-90
    November 9

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    Awww this is so beautiful, a beauty to the eyes and mind... kind of has a very peaceful feel to it yet has a lot of depth in the simple words written here. Great work!


  • Ani Grace
    November 8
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    AH...

    Sweet again...how could anyone ever say no to that?


  • StarEyes
    November 8

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    Bubs,

    "Love me
    today...

    Love me
    always...

    Love me
    this second...

    I love you..."

    Sigh.....!

    Yep! that is amazing! I love this one.... I might have to borrow parts of this You really did great with this one! I think may be one of my favorites from you!

    and love

    Nyetta



  • Nature Song silver member
    November 8

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    Love me for always
    for what I am
    Not what you want me
    to be

    Piano keys play
    as we dance
    Moonlite beams
    and star streams

    "Love me for today...
    as you love yourself!

    ~Sie

    This poem speaks volumes...no words needed to convey the sentiments felt, it is in the knowing of what love means.

  • What everyone dreams of and strives for, right? I wonder if it would sound better if you put today where now is, this second where today it, and now where this second is.... Just a suggestion... Anyway, this is Awesome!

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