my words are jumbles

Words can be written and sung
they can be spoken to
some,

my words tho can't tell
what i so badly want to say
only show me what i want to see

my words can speak of falling
in love but can not give you the
feelings i felt.

My words can tell of great
wars but can not give you the
feeling of the solder who has

been wounded in war.

my words can take you

to your happy place but can

not fix what damage has

already been done

my words are jumbles

what did you think?

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By me, right now

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pippa1
November 15, 2009
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amazing, i wish was as good as you! :)
KnightOfTheRose
November 8, 2009

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Wow. This poem was really good. I liked the idea about your words being jumbled. Very nice and the way you ended the piece with the poems title. Great work

-Steve-