There's a dream beyond the horizon,
There's a sigh in every heart.
There's a song that keeps on playing,
Life's a stage, in which we're a part.
There's a door for us all to open,
If only we can find the key...
There's a longing in each heart
And its inside you and me.
And when you find the one,
Who fulfils all your hopes and dreams.
Nothing is as it was anymore....
For you've found out what all of these mean!
A contest entry
- Romance Rhyme (with a hitch) by poets whisper.
550 points, ended November 17, 9 entries
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I found myself humming ... nice job. I have only one suggestion and that is L4 ... for the sake of rhythm I would say, Life's a stage, we play our part. Just a suggestion.
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Thanks so much for your comment...
... and suggestion lol. Much appreciated..!
Olwin
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Very nice metaphor here with all the doors and their meanings in life The choices that e make affect the next door that we choose to open. Life is certainly like a maze
Lovely rhyme and flow
Gaylene
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this is a pretty poem hopefully finding contentment...well done..Dan
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Thankyou Dan amd Lu Your comments are much appreciated! Lol. Take care
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I'm lucky, I have found my dream....I hope you have too.
I like your rhyme here and I like the content.
Lu x
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