Is it sunset or dawn?
The colors in the sky that I see out my window
after looking at your photo-
are they announcing a new day
or the end of the old one?
I would like to think that they mean
that time is allowed to stop,
especially with you and I.
Death is not the end.
It only means that I cannot see you face to face.
And it does not mean
that your pictures are all I have left.
I see you in the sky with the first star of the night
and in my dreams when I sleep
and I will see you again
when the colors of all things fade
and my breath stops
I will see you again.
Until then, stay with me everywhere, in all things and places.
And I will find you, and keep you.
Until we meet again...
What do you think?
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emotional and moving
This is a lovely piece about a lost love,I hope you find happiness again while on this earth till you meet your soul mate again. -
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Thanks! Im trying....
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i am always here if you need to talk to someone,try and stay positive and things will begin to get better
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I am speechless!
this is an unbelievably sad poem because I have known the one you write about - this is a beautifully written work to a beautiful man - I have never gone thru what you have but I do know loss. I have learned from loss never to take another for granted and to remember this life is but a vapor and there is so much for you ahead - I myself want to get up, brush the pain off and forge ahead so that the only time I am breathless it won't be just for one person or for one time in my life but that my rest of days when I look back on them will not only leave me breathless but I will leave the One who cut His life short for me breathless for me. There is no one who will love me like Jesus - we are coming to the end of days and the only thing that will matter in the end is our love for the One Who saved our souls. For one day we will meet HIm again......
My dear Coleen - looking so forward to seeing your mom and dad and Matt and Will and Jen and THE BABY!!!!!!!!! I am taking Greyhound Thursday morning. I love you so much sweetie. Craig and I are here for you if you need us. Please don't be angry with Craig. I think you know him enough to realize he cares for you and worried for you like if you were his daughter.
Finally, stay close to Jesus, get in His precious word, and love HIM without limits, that has become my own prayer lately
Love,
AUntie
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Thanks!
Im constantly reminded that his spirit is still with me, in many ways, and it always comforts me. He was such a beautiful person and Im glad to have had him in my life.
As for Craig, I'm not so much angry as just completely offended. He screamed and cursed at me for something he was mad at my brother for. I did nothing wrong but I got screamed at. That's NOT right. I've forgiven him but I feel that he owes me an apology. If he was mad at my brother he should have confronted my brother about it. A Myspace page is nothing but a place to joke around with your friends on; its not something to take seriously. However, the fact remains that it was a total violation of privacy to explore Matt's page and go thru his emails and friends pages. I understand that Matt was dumb enough to not logout of his myspace account on Craig's computer, but come on...
I want you to know that my problem is not with you. I hope you don't feel like you are a casualty of this rift. Its a shame that you get caught in the middle, but Im not, and never was, mad at you.
And I hope that both of you realize that I do have a relationship with the Lord. I may not explore my faith the way you guys do, but I love the Lord and pray and thank Him everyday not just for the good things in my life, but also for the horrible things, becuz I know that its God's will unfolding. I'm doing the best I can these days with everything that has happened to me in the past year and a half. Sometimes it makes an individual question their own faith when other people are constantly doubting it from a distance. And that really sucks. Hopefully instead of attacking my lifestyle or the fact that I don't go to church, people can thank God that I love Him and keep trying in my own way to accept His will and continually ask Him to draw me close to Him. My heart is only seen by Him and myself. You can't judge a book by its cover sometimes.
I love you Auntie and I always will, no matter what happens or who says what. I will always be here for you and I know you'll always be here for me too. You are so special to me and I know we will always be very close.
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why is this ur only comment??? YOUR AMAZING
this poem speaks truly. i wish i could beileave ther is life after death. my hopes seem to die along with me even though love lasts 4ever. even in an invisibul after life.
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I have to agree with you...I think hope does die even tho love lasts forever. But Im reminded of a quote by Peter Steele from the band Type O Negative:
"No Hope=No Fear"
Ive found that so many of my fears have been erased since Ive lost all hope. Thats such a freeing experience. Unfortunately, loss is an unavoidable facet of life. But it really does make you stronger. It helps you deal with the next fucked up thing that will eventually come your way.
Thanks for reading and leaving such a thoughtful comment!
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