If simply said, that just for now,
I'll bear my soul in part,
So should it be
The glimpse you see,
Reveals the truest heart
If not for this, than for the one
I must restrain the word
That yields what be,
To none, but he
Who cares my heart be heard
A treasure lost, 'neath deaf and dumb,
I'll treasure he alone;
He'll rest no more,
On ocean's floor,
This treasure's worth is known
Take care My Love, I'm bound to warn,
Alert my heart remains,
In falsehoods lie,
The Demons'cry,
To bind a heart in chains
No promise can I leave with thee,
No vict'ry guaranteed;
For all your might,
Must bid goodnight,
Should The Lion intercede
So carry on, and softly trod
This rich and broken earth,
A battle ground,
Where now is found,
Such evident rebirth
And so, permit me still, perhaps
To speak one final piece:
Should come the day,
I bid you stay,
To you, my heart's releas'd
For in this hour of wishful hope
My heart, it softly sings,
Of such a day,
I'll whisper "stay",
And spread these broken wings~
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Beautiful
I am enjoying every single line...over and over and over...
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^-^ I loved it. It flows very nicely. I can't wait to read more of your work
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This was a great poem, even though I read them more of a lyrical piece. It had a great beat to it. I like this.
This was my favorite stanza:
If simply said, that just for now,
I'll bear my soul in part,
So should it be
The glimpse you see,
Reveals the truest heart
Rock On
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Dax♥~*•
Clappies for you.
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Rich and beautiful!
Each line flows to the next one. I enjoyed reading the poem, line by line.
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