Dear Lord,
Today I looked across the sky,
and you took my breath away.
Colors guided by your hands,
sending rays to my face in passing by.
Warming my heart,
and renewing my faith.
We are as one now,
You and I.
For I have listened,
to the whispers in the wind.
In this vast universe,
it reminds me how amazing You are.
A contest entry
- amazing... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended November 20, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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To look at earths beauty and be able to see the artist as is. God and the greatest creation of all time. perfect for the picture. I did enjoy as always.
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Ah..very charming tone and the note of the messege ..so true..and so much beautifully stated as well..very thoughtful poetry..well done..
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Sie....your prayers are so gentle, and I am touched today by it when emotions are so mixed .....I treasure it and am bookmarking it! sis
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Thank you Rose...Your comments my sister are always a blessing!
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Lovely Poem ~Sie
Great poem my dear - It's simply amazing... Kisses XxX
Always a pleasure to read your poems
I know it's been a while.
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a poem and a prayer, i think; but maybe that is how poetry began for some, to express feelings of gratitude and...how the beauty of the world convinces us, we are a small part of something much greater...lovely poetry...PK
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Thank you for commenting Pk...means a lot. I do believe that prayers and hyms began as simple songs passed orally then when written language came along they were finally written down. Music was added much later! ~Sie
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beautiful, picture and poem.
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Thank you Buddy! Always a pleasure for you to stop by and read my poems! ~Sie
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Well, in this life we live, there are always messages being given in the forms of amazement, and this comes as no surprise at all.
Only today did I look to the skies, feel the Whispering Wind speak to me and show what matters in life, the knowing that a bond between two is forever. Your words here do the exact same and in poetic excellence.
Think it easy to see you crowned this one, well done.
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Thank you Mike for your vey heartfelt words. Your comments are always welcome. ~Sie
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